Saturday, July 18, 2009

My Argument: It is better to be sustainable.

It is better to be sustainable.

I think it is better to be sustainable because if we don't live sustainably we will use all the worlds resources, it stops animals and plants being killed unnecessarily, it will stop as much CO2 escaping into the atmosphere, it is cheaper to live sustainably and because it is better for your health.

Firstly it is better to be sustainable because we will use all the worlds resources of we aren't careful, at the moment if every one carried on as we are now, it would take not one, but five earths to sustain our needs and if we use all the worlds resources now there will be none left for future generations.

Another reason why it is better to live sustainably is because it saves plants and animals from being killed. plants and animals are a vital part of the eco-system and if you destroy just one plant or animal the whole eco-system suffers from it.

Living sustainably also stops CO2 escaping into the atmosphere. CO2 makes ice melt faster than it would on its own and that makes ocean levels rise which makes coastal areas flood. CO2 is also a poisonous gas.

It is also cheaper to live sustainably, because you would grow most of your food, not buy it. you would also reuse more and use things until they wore out, not until you wanted something new.

My last reason on why it is better to live sustainably is because it is better for your health. if you grow your own food using sustainable fertilizers then it will have more nutrients than bought food which is grown using artificial pest controls and fertilizers.

Those are my reasons on why it is better to live sustainably.

2 comments:

  1. Marvellously written! Well done - this is a quality argument.
    Keep up the great work!

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  2. I just had a closer look and am wondering about some of your use of commas....
    Well done for paragraphing :-)

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